Today the chairman's team, through many drafts and a lot of erasing, has made progress in our essay. The robot team has come to a standstill as we try to fix a problem with the bridge and the robot. Until this problem is fixed we cannot continue with the robot. So far the chairman's team has a solid theme about the evolution of an engineer, a phrase coined by our fellow team mate Katarina, and how we have changed and expanded to better our future. This took an incredible amount of work, grit, and creativity. Manny gave one of the best sentences of the last paragraph to us in a very inspirational manner. Otis gave way too many metaphors. Beilee contributed much of the text. Camila gave many constructive criticisms and comments. Our mentor Haylee wrote our ideas on the board, kept us on track, and did a lot of erasing. The chairman’s team is taking advantage of the extra time to have everyone write down their story so that they can be analyzed by the chairman’s team to incorporate into the essay. Tomorrow chairman's team will spend the entire day finishing our essay submission.
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